A Clear Room for Onions
I keep my life in a paper bag,
one of those straight, brown
bags you might get at a grocery store.
What I’d really like to do
is stretch out,
build a house
with rooms
for each thing in my life.
I’d have one room
with a plaque that reads:
ONION ROOM
another plaque that says,
PLEASE RELAX, YOU DON’T HAVE TO EAT IT.
I KNOW YOU DON’T LIKE ONIONS.
Another room for apples
all in red.
I would put my books
down on a shelf in a gray room,
gray like the color of smoke;
smoke is the color
of listening.
Sometimes I wish I would
spend more time in this room.
I really want to have space.
There will be plenty of clean light
from windows and lamps.
My guitar will go in a room
with a plaque:
DISTRACTION.
Each room will have colors.
A blue room for the water
I carry in a canteen
because I’ve learned my lesson.
I’ll have to put my heat
in an orange room.
Red has been taken by apples,
and yellow is reserved for my childhood.
A clear room for onions,
transparent like my love.
What I really want is a house
to extend my back through
and yawn.
I’ve heard that
if you put things
in paper bags,
they ripen faster,
but I keep stumbling over objects in the dark
and the humid smell
of paper is stifling.
August 9, 2007 at 10:07 pm
Yo! You is deep, yo!
August 10, 2007 at 5:14 pm
Hey Jason, hows the air in Ohio? You need to get Charity to get a page. Also I want to hear more of your writing so send it my way.
August 10, 2007 at 5:27 pm
Cool beans. Actually, don’t forget, there’s a 1000-word-story fiction call at localcolor.wordpress.com. The deadline is the 15th. Charity might be putting something together for that. I know the Kelly (the otter) is.
August 11, 2007 at 4:07 pm
How do you want me to submit that to you? Do you remember The More I Sleep? (the story of a disgruntled sub shop employee on his way back home). What do you think of that for a possible submission? Are there any themes this time?
August 11, 2007 at 4:38 pm
The theme of this is travel, so that one could actually work. Look it over, see how long it is (I have a copy somewhere….)
August 13, 2007 at 7:52 pm
Dig the new layout. Some of the print is small, but I think that’s my mom’s computer, and not yours.
August 13, 2007 at 11:12 pm
Love the poem, Matt. The title and leaping connections of rooms and colors and feelings; my favorite room is definitely the one with the plaque “please relax, you don’t have to eat it.” Boy could I use a room like that right now! Except I’d add the plaque “beans prohibited here.” =)
August 14, 2007 at 1:23 am
Jason, when is the deadline again for submissions? How should I submit that? Did you see the link to local color? I may call you regarding this new layout and how I can use it’s full potential. Adios.
August 15, 2007 at 12:18 am
The deadline is tomorrow (Aug 15th).
August 15, 2007 at 6:49 pm
Hey, deadline’s today. You can just e-mail it to my jaynova at rocketmail dot com address.
Also, I hope your reading my blog at jaynova.wordpress.com. It’s compelling stuff!
Oh, and Matt…go to Okkervil River’s myspace page and listen to the track “John Allyn Smith Sails”. It is brilliant. Listen to it in it’s entirety before forming an opinion.