Little Beetle on your back
little baby Beetle
rolling arms and legs
-walking upside down
carapace wings
precious delicate antenna
I am so afraid of you
April 10, 2008
April 10, 2008
Little Beetle on your back
little baby Beetle
rolling arms and legs
-walking upside down
carapace wings
precious delicate antenna
I am so afraid of you
April 14, 2008 at 8:21 pm
I like! But, I kept wanting to read it without any punctuation. I like the roll of the words without their inhibition. It makes me see/feel the beetle more. Just a thought.
April 14, 2008 at 8:22 pm
Commas, that is. Inhibition of commas. Sorry!